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1. camynicol5 on Chapter 1 Wed 29 Oct 2025 08:57AM UTC

   

   Wow that was... I'm gonna need that part2!

   Love the moment with Cho! The fact that Lisbon was staying with Minelli and the way you dived inside Jane's head, his reasons for leaving. They're very true and we did need to focus on it a little bit more; his ptsd, but also Lisbon's pov is so valid. Ugh.

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2. 1. light_loves_the_dark on Chapter 1 Thu 30 Oct 2025 05:02PM UTC

      

      yes cho is the best!! and yes it's actually such a good dilemma because it's so complicated and balanced. i'm so glad you've liked it so far!

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