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  1. silverryu25 on Chapter 3 Thu 04 May 2017 04:03PM UTC

    I have no idea why but I was on the edge of my seat this whole chapter (＠_＠)

    I love the slow buildup to the meeting. I could totally feel the tension and apprehension Sans was feeling while driving. The remark that he was stopped by the police giving such a realistic feel to Sans fear giving it a more depth when it's something that is happening outside of himself.

    And I love the UF brothers reaction to meeting Sans! Reds first sentence had to be a swer X'D
    And the bet was an awesome detail! Wonder how Sans qill take that (✧ω✧)

    Also I love the contradictions in this so much. The fact that the UF brothers are the ones staying in the Reservation and Sans isn't while at the same time Sans seems like the one really having trouble adjusting to living with humans and Red seems rather ok at first glance. I know that probably isn't all there is to it sonce we know nothing about the UF versions but I like the impression I'm getting and having it changed latter will only be more interesting! X3

    Looking forward to learning more about Red and Edge ( ´ ∀ `)ノ～ ♡

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    1. Mercy_Run on Chapter 3 Wed 10 May 2017 08:58PM UTC

      I love working with Bourbon on this. <3 I need to balance all of my stories.

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