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  1. Account Deleted on Chapter 4 Thu 08 Mar 2018 04:28AM UTC

    Okay, THIS CHAPTER WAS A GREAT RIDE!!!! I LOVED IT!!!

    I see Poudretteite is still precious, a bit crazy and armless, but still precious! You gotta love that cinnamon roll! Blue Moon is also precious, but in a totally different way than Poudretteite! Blue Moon gives off a sad vibe and it makes you want to just hug her and never let go! She acts almost like a lost ghost! That probably didn't make sense, I'm not very good at words! xD but to summarize, the two are precious!

    Now, onto Ammolite! I LOVE her! She's characterized quite well! She's so angry and confused and that's exactly how she should be! I bet dying and then waking up as someone else with limited memory isn't very easy, especially when you share a body and mind with 5 other gem types! Like i said, i loved how she was written and how Steven is kind of like her safe place because that is the one thing all of the gems had in common and it's just adorable! (And I don't know why, everytime she gets mad, I always think of Lapis taking over even though their minds are all fused together lol)

    And the fact that ONE of the six know Poudretteite has me hyped *_* i really have no idea who it could be!

    Keep up the great work, smore! The chapter was great and I can't help but to admire at how consistent everyone is! Your writing is absolutely amazing!

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    1. VonSmore on Chapter 4 Fri 10 Aug 2018 08:07PM UTC

      Ahhh! Thank you so much! That means a lot! ^o^

      Poudretteite can never be precious. Only insane. Lol! I guess you could say "She needs a hand". BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAIamsostupidHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
      Blue Moon as a ghost. I never thought of it that way! But you're completely right! she sort of does!
      Excellent observation! *w*

       

      I'm surprised you like Ammolite!
      I currently hate her.. -w-,,
      You're so much kinder to Ammolite than I am. I slam her, talk about how poorly drawn she is, and every other flaw.
      But you're so nice, being reasonable towards her rage and pointing out her good qualities. XD

      Bwahahaha! It shall make itself known with time! *w*

      Thank you again! I don't know if the next chapter is very consistent though. LOL!

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