I absolutely loved reading this first chapter. There were only a couple misspelled words and grammer issues, so overall a job well done! I love how you started out with the different reactions of each character. I'm really excited for the next chapter and to see where you decide to go with the plot.
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x_Astraea_x on Chapter 1 Fri 11 May 2018 01:15PM UTC
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