watergirl480 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Sun 13
May 201802:39AM UTC
Your metaphors and analogies make so much sense, it’s uncanny. This piece is a work of art in every way and is an ideal that story telling should look to. Your ability to immerse the reader into their mindsets and fleshed out history in a natural flow is beyond admirable. Thank you for giving us this masterpiece, and I wish all the best to you.
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