God damn! You know how to deliver!! I feel like I'm just a broken record at this point! This was amazing!! I'm so in love!! Yes ignis is obvi in pain and hurting, but I am living for this pining!!! XD the bed sharing! That dream! The cuddling when he awoke!!! Aaaldkfjdhahkalaa!!! Its so amazing! I am in love!!
I also just realized that the petals are the color of promptos eyes...and I'm just... (ಥ﹏ಥ) beautiful detail. Judging from the title of this story I'm assuming the petals belong to delphiniums, which are just stunning. ♡ you truly have such a talent in writing, my friend. The more I'm reading the more I'm just so engrossed into this world you've created. Not once am I bored or skimming ahead, I am genuinely just so enraptured by your story-telling. It's incredible, from all the details you put forth along with the thought process each individual is going through. Not to mention your dialogue is on point with everyone. I'm just so amazed!! Why doesnt this story have more kudos?! It deserves all the kudos! ♡♡♡
Anywho, sorry to ramble there! I have to pause for a second to help with some cleaning. I cant wait to come back and finish this :))))) I'm dying to know what will happen next!!
Okay, this one is hitting me hard. Thank you!!! I'm always afraid that my writing isn't interesting, or is too wordy, or that I don't get everyone's voices right. Especially Ignis. :P But.... fjdfkakauhbhfh!!!!! Honestly, I was terrified when I first started writing this, because the kudos count was so low and I thought that people didn't like it. But I had a few loyal commenters that really helped me pull through. ♡ It kind of became an "if all else fails, finish this for them" thing. But... it's just so good to hear that I'm doing some stuff right. :]
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ArchivedSpirit on Chapter 4 Sun 22 Jul 2018 07:43PM UTC
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