Yep, borrowed your soldier thought and just reworked it.
It's fun for me that you got to see the whole story in beta and you see the changes. Sometimes they're tiny, just a few words at a time, but they do make a difference. It actually makes me feel better to know that editing works.
(I'm juuuuuuust about to start querying a novel. Every edit helps!)
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Mendeia on Chapter 4 Tue 16 Oct 2018 02:43AM UTC
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