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  1. viiperfang on Chapter 2 Thu 03 Jan 2019 05:50PM UTC

    A long-furred, gray, tabby cat with orange eyes wearing a flower crown consisting of orange and yellow flowers, and green leaves. The background is a muted green with a golden ring mostly hidden behind the cat.

    AAAAHHHHH
    AAAAAAHSHSHDHDHHDJSJD

     

    What. In the. Everliving. Fuck!?

     

    It started out funny, with Geoff making an Alt-Rye figure out his feelings, talking to another Alt-him and the crew... and then things took a dark turn immediatly. It went from like, 0 to 300 real fucking quick, dude.

    Holy shit.

    Wow. The way this chapter ended put a bad taste in my mouth because knowing you, something tells me it won't be the last time Geoff has to do something like that. And it won't fee good the next time, either.

    You really like to hurt us, huh?

     

    Well-written chapter as always, though!

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    1. Galaxacious on Chapter 2 Fri 04 Jan 2019 02:19AM UTC

      It's never too early in a story to hit you with the feels :)
      Funny enough, the end of the chapter also left Geoff with a bad taste in his mouth!
      But you're right, Geoff will have to make a lot of tough calls in the future. How the hell is he going to do that and keep his sanity intact?
      I enjoy making you suffer as I enjoy making Geoff <3 Although I did have to take a few moments when I killed off Michael. The last 3k words or so hurt my heart.

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      1. viiperfang on Chapter 2 Fri 04 Jan 2019 05:11PM UTC

        A long-furred, gray, tabby cat with orange eyes wearing a flower crown consisting of orange and yellow flowers, and green leaves. The background is a muted green with a golden ring mostly hidden behind the cat.

        I have a question I'd love you to answer if it won't be a spoiler. Is this going to be entirely Geoff's POV or are we going to see the others flipping out about Geoff literally just, disappearing into thin air? I'd love it either way, though.

        Also, man. This is one of the series that I am super excited to read every time you put out a new chapter. I literally have to stop everything I'm doing and read it right away, in one sitting. It always leaves me on the edge of my seat, waiting for more, for you to once again rip my heart out and crush it under your boot.

        You are simply an amazing writer, and I look forward to anything you may write in the future!

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        1. Galaxacious on Chapter 2 Sat 05 Jan 2019 01:22AM UTC

          Yeah this story's going to be from Geoff's perspective. I know it's a break from the other two but there's a lot I want to do with him. This way I guess we can miss them as much as Geoff does :)

          And hell yeah, this makes me so happy to read. It's cool to hear I have such an impact!! It really does help me keep writing.

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