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  1. Lovestoread (Guest) on Chapter 6 Sun 10 Feb 2019 05:58PM UTC

    This series hurts my heart. It's beautifully written and so very moving, but heartbreaking none the less. I'm so glad the other pieces were written first so that I can remember the joy and happiness that comes after. I don't write this to make to feel bad; I write this to let you know you made me feel and that is because you are a good writer with incredibly well written characters, scenarios and imagery. I feel proud of you and I don't even know you (or if it's even appropriate to feel that way).

     

    One line from Happy's chapter, about the kind of rage it takes to injure the woman you claimed to love as Steve did Toni stayed with me for days. Those words, that image was so haunting and hurtful and frightening. It makes Siberia even more tragic because it means Steve's actions were premeditated. Steve didn't just lose it in the heat of the moment, he was planning on killing/seriously injuring her before then. Even when he was sleeping with her, kissing her, telling her he loved her, he was already planning out how to make her comply or how to remove her as an obstacle to what he wanted by any means necessary. That's...there are no words for how diabolical that is. This is one of 3 stories I've read were one of the characters (that's not Steve or Tony) realizes it as well.

     

    If I may, I would like to see a chapter written from Sam's point of view, especially after Thanos is defeated and he's on trial. I can't imagine,if he's any kind of decent person, that any of what comes to light will not fill him with remorse or regret. I like to believe he's a good person but I've never gotten a good grasp on his character or his thought process. I'm really interested to see what you make of him.

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    1. MageOfCole on Chapter 6 Sun 10 Feb 2019 10:01PM UTC

      MageOfCole

      I think I love you

      Thank you for the wonderfully thought out comment!

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