Comment on Courting by Contract

  1. VolceVoice on Chapter 11 Fri 09 Jan 2015 01:18AM UTC

    Typos?! STILL?

    Nope, don't mind at all. Please save me from myself! I might argue over grammar, though. :D

    And there doesn't seem to be any way to get those blasted quotation marks going the right way after my beloved dashes...

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    1. LinnetMelody on Chapter 11 Fri 09 Jan 2015 01:27AM UTC

      Happiness is a dragon in formaldehyde

      There's only one typo that stood out, to me: Bad enough that she’d bragged about her mother—in from of the son of Gísla, no less—and showed off her own poor work . . . I think that should be "in front of the son" instead, yes?

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    2. Vladsgirl on Chapter 11 Fri 09 Jan 2015 01:46AM UTC

      Here's the one that jumped out at me

      ::Thorin snorted. “Is he the one who will be asking me for you hand in marriage?”

      Shouldn't that be "your hand"?

      I thought I saw another one, but now I can't find it. Maybe on the re-read.

      Last Edited Fri 09 Jan 2015 01:47AM UTC

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      1. VolceVoice on Chapter 11 Fri 09 Jan 2015 02:15AM UTC

        You're both right and I've fixed 'em. :)

        Thank you -- I'm careful with monsters like Melhekhinhaz Buzn (thank heavens for cut, paste, and "Add to Dictionary"), but it's far too easy to skim over the tiny stuff!

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