Well, even bing a Post-Reichenbach it is a decent one (except for the cliffhangers, god I would kill you, if I wouldn't loose my interest with non-cliffhanger-storys far too quick).
Commenting on the fast pace of the story was not meant in a negative way. I like it, since most storys go rather slow and overly detailed, or not detailed enough to excuse the slow pace, or try a pace as you do but end up only scratching on the surface of the characters, you found a very good balance in my opinion. How can you keep your focus on a story that you write over nine months? That is fifteen or even more chapters long? I'd throw it against a wall frustrated. (If one could throw Bytes)
I think there was a death-threat in my latest comment...don't take it too serious.
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BID on Chapter 5 Sat 02 Feb 2013 01:08PM UTC
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