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1. Seiberwing on Chapter 3 Thu 16 Apr 2015 02:36PM UTC

   

   You write an intensely good action scene.

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2. 1. Kieron_ODuibhir on Chapter 3 Fri 17 Apr 2015 05:22PM UTC

      

      :D :D Thank you! People aren't kidding when they say fight scenes are complicated--I've never just written one beginning to end, bam, with minimal editing needed, like you can sometimes do with a conversation--but having it come out well enough that it will work for readers is completely worth it.

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