Comment on Black Squadron: Loyalties

  1. maedre13 on Chapter 6 Wed 05 Feb 2020 10:54AM UTC

    Seriously, Luke, you leave the Imperial Navy for a few weeks and LOOK what happens! You’re already wrapped up in a fire fight! I say this boy attracts trouble wherever he goes.
    (just like Han)
    And oh, he is PREPARED. We have smoke detonators now?!!
    “Tatooine's not gonna be renowned for its drinks any time soon." Uuh Tatooine’s not gonna be renowned for ANYTHING any time soon, if you ask me. Unless we’re speaking about famous people COMING from Tatooine.
    Oh boy, Luke is severely out of it. He needs… some vacation, and proper sleep, AND NO IMPERIALS BOARDING THE SHIP.
    LUKE, NO EXPLOSIONS ON THE FALCON, PLEASE. I’m more worried about the Falcon than about the troopers but duh. You need to set PRIORITIES. I feel like Luke is using the dark side though and that’s not good?!! (then again, Vader didn’t exactly try to make him a Jedi, did he)
    They are really unlucky, are they not??? The troopers WOULD have left!!
    Oh my GOD, I REALLY thought you were going to have Vader capture Leia AND TORTURE HER JUST LIKE HER BROTHER. But she got awaaaay yay!!!!
    Lovely chapter, I HOPE that Luke will get better!! (I know that he will)

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    1. Azalea_Scroggs on Chapter 6 Tue 11 Feb 2020 02:18PM UTC

      Luminous orange blur with a tiny ship

      Ahaha oh exactly. Poor Luke, Skywalkers are trouble magnets. <3
      Yeeeep! They're always prepared now. :P
      Indeed xD Although, I read Tatooine was actually set on a big hyperspace lane and Luke's idea that it's the farthest away you can be from the bright centre of the universe isn't actually completely accurate :P although it certainly is arid, hard, far from tech and inhospitable...
      Yeah, poor Luke needs all of that xD
      Hmmm, I think the best way to describe it is that Luke and the Force aren't on friendly terms right now :P I think it's more that he's losing control of it.
      They are unlucky, haha. Poor Luke. :(
      Hehe. No, not this time. :P
      Luke getting better is kinda the point of the story, sooo... not yet. But he will. Eventually.

      Thank you so much for your kind comment <3 it was a joy to receive it :)

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