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  1. Library_of_Cronos on Chapter 5 Fri 07 Aug 2020 08:10PM UTC

    I'm a little worried about what Ford means by "This will help exponentially in our studies". Like....how far are they gonna take this? I don't wanna see her hurt :/

    Good chapter as always! I liked Danny swearing by using Clockwork's name and the rock puns :)

    Last Edited Fri 07 Aug 2020 08:10PM UTC

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    1. orphan_account on Chapter 5 Fri 07 Aug 2020 08:12PM UTC

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      man i thought the same when i read the sentence,,, i had no idea how to make it sound less threatening and while i can say catori shall stay for the rest of the story i have no idea if she wont be hurt jskfakfjsk
      thanks for reading!!

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      1. Library_of_Cronos on Chapter 5 Sat 08 Aug 2020 12:43AM UTC

        Maybe "we could learn a lot from her!" would sound better? I'm glad that she'll be ok at least for now. I know it's weird to have an emotional connection to a fictional ghost animal, but her and Danny seem to get each other and it's cute :)

        Last Edited Sat 08 Aug 2020 12:43AM UTC

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