This is such a lovely love confession. Kudos to Jaskier for being so good with words (and even more kudos to you, the author, for being so good with words!), to find a phrasing that really conveys to Geralt his devotion and openness for their relationship to be whatever brings them both the most joy.
“Fine, then. Let me promise you this instead: that I will stay by your side for as long as I am able, for as long as I am wanted, and—and in whatever capacity brings us both the most joy.” Jaskier’s heart was pounding, and he knew that Geralt could hear it. He wondered what Geralt made of it, what Geralt thought had spurred his racing pulse and sudden nervousness. He wondered if love had a scent.
“That’s a very open-ended promise,” Geralt said, quiet and careful. “A man might read something into it that wasn’t intended.”
Jaskier swallowed hard. “I assure you, dear heart, that the words were chosen with utmost care.”
Oh, I AGONIZED over that exchange. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. It was probably the hardest part of this chapter to write, and knowing that it paid off makes me short of breath. I’m overjoyed that you liked it!
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