Comment on The Princess Bride: 2018 Rewrite

  1. Dante (Guest) on Chapter 5 Sat 05 Sep 2020 05:11AM UTC

    You did WONDERFULLY! Most of it has been the exact plot and dialogue as the movie (I appreciate that you stick true to the source in the bits where change wouldn't make sense or be necessary), and the addition of Willow adds a different meaning to some things but almost makes it make more sense. Other parts were never included but you take us there in the same style and it fits. Nothing feels stretched or out-of-character. Some of the transitions are a little awkward but I don't think I could do better (and it might just be my brain saying "that's not in the movie, I don't remember it and it is therefore out of place" not sure). I probably would have left out the bits of Fezzic and Inigo leaving tho. And the characters' thoughts make sense and all fit the dialogue and the characters.
    I've had a wonderful time reading this, thank you.

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