I subscribed at chapter 1 because I was curious to see how this fic would turn out, and chapter 2 definitely shows that this has lots of potential! I am so excited to see how this fic will go from here! ^^
EDIT: WOAH this is unrelated but I was staring at your profile picture and username wondering why it looked so familiar-- then it hit me, you were the first commenter on an abandoned fic I made back in 2016 on a different account (Foxtrot by Luckless, a Miraculous Ladybug fanfic). I almost never post fics so that's why it stood out. Its such a small world! :0
Uhh I feel weird talking about myself on your fic, so more about your fic-- poor mug. Shattered. Aoko's reaction to Kaito is really good, and I wonder if she'll appear again in the story, at the very least to mention the encounter with the "stranger". Also, I just realized that Aoko's number works but not Jii's? I first assumed it was because it was a different dimension, but now I realize either that was a backup phone line so of course Jii doesn't have it in this dimension, or something happened to Jii :0 Same thing with the mother. Very interesting!
:0 Wow! I went back to look at the fic and I actually did recognize it even though it’s been so long, haha. I’m surprised you remember me though!
Aoko will definitely appear again, this won’t be her last appearance! And I don’t want to spoil too much, but I’m glad you noticed the thing with the phones :)
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Flim on Chapter 2 Sun 18 Oct 2020 05:59PM UTC
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