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  1. Madance on Chapter 2 Sat 21 Nov 2020 02:08AM UTC

    I'm liking the story so far. As a suggestion(only if you find it fitting to the story), it would be interesting if Veronica experienced some shock over seeing the Heather's trio peform their usual bullying on others and knowing she couldn't anything, specially now that she needed to keep some level of civility with them, but also, not stopping her usual self from speaking her mind(she isn't a push over and usually answer the girls with her sarcasm/condescending tone).

    Her slowly drifting away from her old friends so she would spend time with Mac, Duke and Chandler.

    Of course, it would be quite awesome if she managed to build close ties with the three Heathers - with each girl acting differently in which way they would acknowledge their proximity to Veronica.
    Example, Mac could express herself around Veronica by being friendly and sweet, Duke could express herself by subtly wrecking anyone who insulted Veronica and by being caring, and Chandler could become increasingly more physical with her, as she is more fascinated with her odd behavior.

    It would be so amusing if each girl (eventually) would feel the need to monopolize Veronica's attention, like, it doesnt even need to be a romantic rivalry, could just be them(I mean Mac and Duke, after all, this story is Chansaw) simply wanting to have a Bff. Nevertheless, a huge jealousy party is bound to happen(and Chandler would be so pissed! She isn't red for nothing!).
    Since Duke/Mac is also a second pairing in this story, maybe this would also work to make them close to each other.

    Anyway, those are just a few things that I could think right now. If those suggestions could inspire you, then it would be great, if not, then at least you will know what you wont be using in the story. In the end, it helps in the same way. ^_______^

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    1. sarcastic_quicksand on Chapter 2 Tue 24 Nov 2020 07:19PM UTC

      Wow, I really like your story ideas :) I am planning to try to develop the relationships between Mac and Veronica and Duke and Veronica in the coming chapters. I'm also toying with when Veronica should figure out that Mac and Duke have feelings for each other, so thanks so much for your suggestions :D

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    2. Anni Stei (Guest) on Chapter 2 Sun 17 Jan 2021 07:06AM UTC

      Hi! Your comment made me realize that Chansaw sounds like Chainsaw, and chainsaw is in "Well fuck me gently with a chainsaw!" So thank you!

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