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1. mutecebu (Guest) on Chapter 3 Sat 24 Oct 2015 07:44PM UTC

   Wow. Loved this tale. Will definitely enjoy reading the conclusion, but I feel like I got the important gist from this. I like how thorough Aladdin was, yet he still suffered unintended consequences anyway via Jaffar. Jasmine's part was my very favorite, though. Her power was very very cool, and I love her interaction with the genie.

   Though I agree with another commenter that Aladdin is less in character than others, he fit the prototypical young male rational fanfiction protagonist, so he didn't feel out of place.

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2. 1. Chrysale (Silvara) on Chapter 3 Sat 26 Dec 2015 03:45PM UTC

      

      I agree with all of these points.

      +1 ^^

      Last Edited Sat 26 Dec 2015 03:45PM UTC

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