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  1. percy_with_an_i on Chapter 1 Fri 06 May 2022 09:28PM UTC

    Hmm ok. I'll start rambling here we go.
    -“Never mind, stupid question. But you’re safe, man. I got you out of prison, you’re never — Phil, what’s wrong with his eyes.” His voice, so concerned a moment ago, shifted to blankness in an instant. “What’s wrong with them.”- this. Straight up one of my favourite parts because I can hear this perfectly in Techno's voice and it fits perfectly and I just love it so much. Shifting to blackness so quickly because he's expecting an explanation and something that /isnt/ the truth that Dream's blind and ahh

    The way Dream was portrayed. the way he struggled to speak but not in the awful stuttering way. His nightmare. The rules that were set on him, how he refuses to make noise, (which is, funnily, is one of the key things on the thing I've been writing for over a month but writers block ://) I love it, how he refuses to eat and the detail that he was once punished for breathing a little too loud because that's. Dunno it hit me in a way.

    Techno being the nicest most helpful person and him trying to lighten the mood with the homeless joke just once and how much he's trying to help and I can just picture him, crystal clear while he's panicking. Also, the addition with this eyes normally being dark brown? Guess what my new headcanon is :)))

    And Dream thinking about how he cant actually picture Techno in his head just.. absolute pain. Jsut. Ahh.

    And they're friends. Techno thought /his friend/ and :( I love them. Dream being blind is also. :( but yea same headcanon.

    The way Techno communicates with Dream. How he waits separately for a while after he asks if Dream wants food, water or potions. How he is so patient. All of these details are too good I'm crying

    Thank you for sharing this with us author I'm thankful :)))

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