Comment on Out With Autumn's Leaves

  1. Soundly (Guest) on Chapter 3 Thu 21 Jul 2022 01:27PM UTC

    Dude what the heck, this is so good. I love the characterization and the weight you give the world. It really makes them feel alive. The dialogue and plot goes together so wonderfully, that even as Sharron and Ivan start a new little venture for the moment, the tale doesn't stop feeling like a tale of endings at all. Just a few loose ends. This was really really good!!

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    1. milkymosaic on Chapter 3 Sun 31 Jul 2022 04:18PM UTC

      by @Yazzdonut

      Thank you so much. <3 I love the concept of "a tale of endings." That's absolutely what I was going for, and I'm glad the fic was able to convey that sense of melancholy. <3

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