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  1. angelita-MacGyver2016 (angel) on Chapter 3 Thu 04 Aug 2022 02:44AM UTC

    *gasps* Mac?! What are you doing?! (I mean, I did vote for more Mac whump, but I was still taken by surprise, lol)

    I loved all the interactions on the trampoline - especially Mac's panic and Jack's don't-give-a-fuck drugged up attitude. They were a great contrast to each other.

    Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter!

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    1. Rosamund_Calais on Chapter 3 Thu 11 Aug 2022 10:31PM UTC

      Ooooh yeah you did vote for more Mac whump. If I ever write these guys into a situation and don't subsequently make it a worse situation, just assume I've been replaced with a clone.

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