So, the thing with Amane/Kokone is that… 1) Just because Yui was their awakening doesn’t necessarily mean that they won’t get together; their chemistry in the show is good (at least it actually exists *cough* Takumi/Yui *cough*) and 2) I’m not that good at writing romance. Like, at all. I’ll either imply or outright state that the characters are together. There is no in-between. I could do Amane/Kokone, but there likely wouldn’t be much focus on it. And on Ran, I don’t really ship her with anyone on the team (and I’m not exactly her biggest fan either) so it’s unlikely that I’ll do much with her other than have her annoy Amane. So, Erika has been on a tightrope since this fic started and she’s been wobbling to and fro each chapter she appears in. Every time she mentioned Red Jesus, that tightrope got closer to snapping. Setsuna, as seen in previous chapters, was really only being held back by Mana’s conclusion that Erika was useful during battle. Explaining to Yui when Amane specifically told people not to finally snapped that rope and Erika fell hard. (Especially since the one she angered that time was a Redeemy, and Setsuna is basically the mom friend of that group, so she’s obligated to do something about it.) She is fine, but she’s in a team-enforced timeout for a while to make sure she doesn’t anger Setsuna any more than she already has. (It likely won’t stick. She’ll probably be back by next chapter.)
Oh okay that makes a lot of sense! Although not to be rude to argue with your opinion of yourself but I do think you write pretty cute romance if that's any consolation but I get what you mean!
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