I am thoroughly charmed by young Simon's voice in this chapter. You really brought him to life here. His questioning and confusion at everything really shows that he's not stupid, he's ignorant (partly by design of the Mage) of the world around him. But I know he will learn.
Baz spelling away Simon's tears was touching. Baz nearly passing out because of Simon summoning the Sword of Mages was touching AND funny.
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messofthejess on Chapter 2 Mon 30 Jan 2023 10:05PM UTC
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