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  1. Finnland on Chapter 2 Mon 30 May 2016 10:22PM UTC

    Ok. Yes. You have me convinced. I was interested in the idea after reading the first chapter, but didn't know what to expect nor did I want to get my hopes up, but this. Maybe I'm just a sucker for this stuff cause it only took one more chapter to hook me but I love it!
    First, your writing is amazing! Lots of detail and everything flows super well. I like how much you put into the case, and especially liked the connection to Jason with it being Garzonas.
    Second, you've already included Dick, and that makes me so happy! I am already looking forward to see how the rest of the batfam will be included in this and to see how you portray this AU.
    And finally, of course, I love the AU. Jason was brought to life in a supernatural way that makes the idea of Dean and Sam's world being a part of the DC one legit.

    I'm glad you updated this quickly. I understand others may not be so speedy but I look forward to it nonetheless. Thank you for this and good luck writing.

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    1. Zoeleo on Chapter 2 Tue 31 May 2016 01:20AM UTC

      And if you look reallllll closely in chapter 1, Tim and Steph make a cameo too ;)

      Thank you. It would have been easier to jump in with them in the Gotham cemetery and hint at the hunt that brought them there, but I really wanted to set up the case to build the feel of the combined worlds. I'm ecstatic it worked for you.

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      1. Finnland on Chapter 2 Tue 31 May 2016 05:04AM UTC

        Ah yes! Now that you mention it I remember. At the restaurant. I thought that was Tim and Steph.
        Well played. ;)

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