My good sis, you have done it again. You have captured their personalities sooo well and Sel in shades (don't hurt nobody now). I love the dialogue about Bree still wearing Nick's chain and how Sel acknowledges it bothers him, but in true Sel fashion, also acknowledges how childish it would be at that point to ask her to take it off. I love that he has waited so long to have her, but still gives her that space. I love Between Bree. She has been through the ringer and is still questioning her place in the world, her place with the people she loves. You really captured her anxiety and trauma. She is like a prisoner of war at this point. Don't get me started on the hand job on the tailgate! Man, listen! The imagery of our "Good boy" about to lose his shit was exquisite. I love the idea of that shared consciousness allowing Bree to get in touch with that shadow side. Ooooh Weee! You are dangerous on here!
Hahaha Selwyn in shades and Breelywn 'tailgating' .Yummy stuff lol Thank you for the dialogue compliment. I've got some more spice planned for them in later chapters 🤭 tehe.
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