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  1. What a fucking loser, Kobra affectionately thought. And to think they were related.

    LMAOOOOO this is why kobra's my favorite

    “You know what, Kobra Kid? You could afford to lend a fucking hand. Maybe then I’d shut up.”

    NOT THE FULL GOVERNMENT NAME DJSFHISJF

    Jet laughed softly, and Ghoul beamed at her. Everyone was now looking at them, but Kobra’s own eyes flocked to Party. Party, who was smiling oh so softly at Ghoul, completely oblivious to anything apart from the boy. Memories of an older time vividly flashed in his mind, proving that years had done nothing to change how his sibling looked at Ghoul.

    im soooooo normal about this line and its implications im defo not giggling and kicking my feet and screaming into my stuffed animal pile

    That is, until the utmost terrifying sentence Ghoul had ever heard was spoken: “Is Ghoul a good kisser?”

    oh i just KNOW ghoul is going to beat her ass later lmao /j

    “Pardon?” they stuttered out once their soul had flown back into their body.

    LMAOOOOOO

    Mortified, Jackie tried to salvage the situation: “Please don’t answer that, we are so, so sorry. What the fuck. I’m so sorry.”

    thank the lord for jackie my beloved <3 you are the light of my life jackie never change im so sorry you have to deal with these dumb bastards (affectionate)

    jackie puts up with entirely too much from them tbh i would have walked out 3 chapters ago lmao /j

    “Oh, why are your panties all in a twist?” Marigold protested, and Ghoul had never wanted to strangle her more than at that very instant. “We’re all adults here.”

     

    “ You’re seventeen ,” Ghoul muttered through gritted teeth.

    JESUS mari i love you but for the love of god read the fucking room

    “I think that’s something that only concerns him and I,” they said with a soft smile, and Ghoul had to bite the inside of its cheek. That fucking bastard. He loved them so fucking much. “Or, um, you know, anyone he gets involved with.”

     

    Ghoul averted his eyes, feeling the gaze of everyone in the room fall on him, assessing its reaction. It did its best to keep a fairly blank face and flashed a dry smile as Sparx, Marigold and Jackie’s eyes bore holes into the back of its head. Kobra, Jet—and probably Party—could likely guess that Ghoul hadn’t been in any relationship or romantic situation of any kind since, well, Party, but the three girls knew . They knew, and at least two of them looked at him expectedly, but Ghoul wouldn’t break in. This was mortifying enough as it was.

    that is a LOADED line i am going to go insane

    It and Party stepped outside. Ghoul was about to tell them goodbye one last time when a hand closed around its wrist.

     

    “You are, by the way.”

     

    Ghoul frowned, confusion etched on its feature. “What?”

     

    Party’s smile could’ve outshone the sunset. “A good kisser.”

    EHAT

    Ghoul rolled its eyes affectionately. “You fucking liar. You knew I was going to react like that.”

     

    “… Yeah. Eh, I still think it’s cute.”

     

    This time, when Ghoul’s fist came flying, Party intercepted it, closing their hand around Ghoul’s own hand. They brought the hand close to them, placing a delicate kiss on it, and Ghoul could feel butterflies violently flap their wings in his stomach.

     

    “Good night, Ghoulie.”

     

    Ghoul blinked twice before remembering to answer. “Y-you too.”

     

    Party stepped back into the diner, chuckling softly. The sound of their laughter haunted Ghoul all the way back to his car.

    FUCKED UPO H MY GID THEY ARE SOOOOO. HHHHHH. im normal about this fic im normal about this fic im normal about this fic im normal abo

    thanks for writing this fic! as you can see im literally in love with the premise and the fucked up web of relationship dynamics youve spun here. very much enjoyed being absolutely insane about yet another banger of a chapter

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    1. holy shit i did not realize this comment had gotten so long i apologize for clogging up the comment section lmao

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      1. NEVER APOLOGIZE FOR THAT OMG

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    2. kobra supremacy you are so right!! (i say that about every character)

      oh there are so many implications!! reading analyses were forced on me but at least now i can fit in so many metaphors and shit in my writing

      jackie tired mom so true

      yess things are moving along!!!

      thank you for being insane about my chapters hgashgfsfhg i greatly enjoyed reading your thoughts in my inbox!!

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