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  1. Jackallope on Chapter 5 Fri 21 Jul 2023 09:55PM UTC

    Sounds good! Although, for the sake of variety and exploring different avenues, might I suggest a different therapist?

    Amethyst has known her entire life she was defective, and that has gotten her to have some serious problems that she overcame. It would be pretty believable that she'd help another quartz going through something similar.

    This is just a suggestion and there's nothing wrong with using Garnet—she's definitely more emotionally stable than Amethyst—but if you want there's always this. Hope I helped!

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    1. black_OUTOUT on Chapter 5 Sat 22 Jul 2023 02:11AM UTC

      You really helped actually. Different therapists for different problems. Garnet would help Jaspersand with her problems with her old friend, saying that this is the past, this friend can't hurt her anymore.

      You know, Jaspersand also has a little tiny crush on Jasper (THE Jasper, not any jasper) since she is such a perfect quartz. But it still hard to me doing her actions. Any ideas?

      The idea that I have in mind, is she really slowly becoming friends with Jaspersand, because in my fanfiction, after the epilogue, she went to homeschool to adequate herself better to Era 3, since this is waht Steven wants. And making friends is included on the list of requisites to mastery Era 3

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      1. Jackallope on Chapter 5 Sat 22 Jul 2023 08:11AM UTC

        This is still your story and you should be the one to write it. I'm happy to help with things you're stuck on, but you should still be the one to write the bulk of it. Plus, I don't want too many spoilers for when I do read it. Just write what you feel is best and share it with the world. If it sucks then you'll know how to improve and can write the next one even better.

        Hope to see the first chapter soon, keep me posted! -Sincerely Jackallope

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        1. black_OUTOUT on Chapter 5 Sat 22 Jul 2023 01:36PM UTC

          I'm sorry, i didn't know you don't like spoilers. Honestly, i never thought you would actually read my story.. thank you so much for all the help and thank you much more for being interested on reading. I will be waiting for your next chapter anxiously. Just one more question.. what time is it? Is 10:36 AM for me..

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          1. Jackallope on Chapter 5 Sun 23 Jul 2023 05:39AM UTC

            I'd prefer not to say what time it was for me

            Last Edited Sun 23 Jul 2023 05:39AM UTC

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            1. black_OUTOUT on Chapter 5 Sun 23 Jul 2023 05:57AM UTC

              I just if your time zone was much different than mine, but it's ok, good night

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