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  1. TaliSands on Chapter 1 Mon 31 Jul 2023 05:17AM UTC

    But at the same time the way Adora’s hair was slipping out of its ponytail, the anger in her eyes – Adora wasn’t having fun anymore. And for some reason that bothered Catra. my heart i remember this catra. this was on the edge of freefalling catra

    “Shadow Weaver told me.”
    And with that, everything inside Catra shattered. fucking fuck. every time, it doesn't ever get easier. that moment of absolute anger

    Adora didn’t even flinch. “Catra,” she said, her voice almost gentle, “Shadow Weaver is in Bright Moon.” i hate that, im crying and i hate that. how gentle she is. it's irrational. feelings often are. and in catra's pov adora's gentleness is acid

    Catra was no Adora. She couldn’t be. So, Shadow Weaver would never love her. No one would ever love her. still crying. and at her core catra would also choose adora over herself and then who is left to choose catra, that's why she fights so hard. someone has to choose her so she will. and im probably reaching but fuck it

    Happy. What a novel concept. Maybe there was someone who loved her after all. oh shit. this is where the road forks.

    Adora had never loved her.
    Catra wasn’t going to let that ruin her life this time. for what is worth this, im really proud of catra. and you. im crying so much

    She wasn’t going to cry over Adora ever again, but she could still scream. i like that line

    “I want you to come with me,” she whispered to the wind, like somehow it would carry the message back to her oldest friend. “Why won’t you come with me?” now i am the one that wants to scream. im so fucking mad. i do remember reading this chapter now. fucking hell. fucking adora. saying what she wants really was a struggle for her back then huh. sigh. nowhere else to go but forward now. lesbians

    thanks for writing. you have such a way to reduce me to my base feelings. just, raw emotion and that is a beautiful thing, cathartic. i do love the multiverse i just procrastinate too good for anyone's good. i loved it. it's amazing and it sets the tone and it shows us where do their choices break the known to form this new unspoiled and promising path. and im really looking forward to everything thats coming. every mistake, flaw and emotion.

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    1. queenmillicentofbystander on Chapter 1 Thu 24 Aug 2023 11:58AM UTC

      I hope all your hopes and dreams for this fic came true, Tal.

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