This was an interesting read! I struggled a little with how immature Andi is at some points, but that's just my personal preferences in my reading. You've done a great job showing how she's growing up and becoming more mature. She's thinking about the repercussions of her actions more often now and also recognizing the plots of those around her as well. I'm excited to see if the trend will follow in the next one!
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Co_chan on Chapter 20 Mon 19 Feb 2024 04:49AM UTC
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Dock872210 on Chapter 20 Mon 19 Feb 2024 05:23AM UTC
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