Comment on JSPR: Volume 3

  1. Archonmage on Chapter 1 Wed 24 Apr 2024 08:35AM UTC

    Babe, wake up, JSPR's back.

    I have missed these people, your OCs are just so creative and I like them so much and they have so much character and, have I mentioned that I like them? eh, bares mentioning again.

    CRAL was cool, they're a good challenge to get the characters to think instead of something you can just hit harder to destroy.

    But I do have to point out that I feel you could have held off on confirming Nadia the receptionist being the Jade serpent for at least another chapter, it would create suspense even if we do know, but on second hand, now we have suspense for what she put in Bloom's gift (funnily enough, in German, gift is poison.)

    I hope to see more soon, just remember to yawn, drown and go down in the end.
    -A random stranger who is excited to see you back.

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    1. EclipsedSkai on Chapter 1 Wed 24 Apr 2024 03:00PM UTC

      It took longer than I thought but hey it is truly back and tysm for your kind words!

      I put a lot of effort into all the characters from CRAL and it's safe to say they WILL be seen again(Beyond V3 too I mean)

      Nadia makes several plays both in and out of Serpent suit and it definitely felt best to reveal sooner than later... Especially given a special reveal that builds off of it later on

      Pretty much all of your allusions are right, the only thing is River is some of Naiads and a lot of the River Styx, with her last name being Achillon in reference to Achilles who got dipped in it

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      1. Archonmage on Chapter 1 Thu 25 Apr 2024 07:04AM UTC

        ooohh I didn't even think of the Styx.

        I will take your word for revealing Nadia's identity being better sooner rather than later.

        As always, best of wishes for any further endeavors you may have planned.

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