This. Is. Awesome! I love this story so far! I genuinely love the characterization of Lance and Keith with a crush~ I'm looking forward to the next chapter a lot!
Eeeek, I'm so glad to hear that!! Especially about the characterization--that's always one of my biggest concerns when writing fics. I debated a lot about whether I wanted this fic to be post-established relationship or before anything had started. The idea of starting with them already having major crushes on each other, but still oblivious to the other's feelings, was just too compelling. I was kind of surprised by not only how easy it was to write them this way, but also how ridiculously fun it was too. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!
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