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  1. flower already knowing — and calling hetty out for being loud in bed — is so good she’s so intuitive i fully believe she’d clock them before anyone else

    Trevor could not explain why this felt so much more intimate than anything sexual they had done together. forever obsessed with them learning intimacy out of order

    flower and trevor’s little fist bump I am hollering they’re so cute

    Perhaps, she could have learned the same lessons through being loved from the very beginning. it’s been over a decade since i read great expectations and i remember very little but i LOVE the way you’re using it here and how even the ghosts can learn and see themselves in fiction and grow from it

    ahsjdkflf not sam writing fanfiction she SO WOULD this is so fucking cute

    dirty dancing is suuuuch a trevor movie!!! oh my god of course! the soundtrack!

    trevor asking what changed in that tiny little voice god he’s so! soft! i love him!!!! lmao alberta just ripping off the bandaid

    wendell getting to see the fruits of his labors actually blossom with hetty and sass and isaac this is so!!! i am emotional!!!

    “I would have chosen to spend forever with you.” SHE LOVES HIM SO MUCH I AM GOING TO COLLAPSE GOD

    When I wake up next to you, my first thought is always “thank god she is still here.” i am. sobbing.

    trevor feeling like they’re trading vows i am WEEPING

    THEYRE SO SWEET I LOVED THIS SO MUCH. this was so beautiful thank you so much for sharing it ❤️

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    1. I actually went back and reread the last chapter after seeing your comment, because it made me so happy and nostalgic! I am DELIGHTED that you loved the fist bump - that's honestly one of my favorite small comedic bits from the whole fic. And yes, Flower and Alberta - in their different ways - see right through Hetty and Trevor and have absolutely no time left of pretending that they don't know about them.

      And yes! Sam writes her spicy Single and Ready to Kringle fanfic and all the ghosts have read it. This should be a real plotline on the show - I thought it was so funny.

      The scene where Trevor watches Dirty Dancing with Alberta, Thor, and Flower was by far the hardest thing to write in the whole fic - it was the last thing I wrote I'm pretty sure - which means I am extra glad it stuck out to you. I just firmly believe that Trevor uses 80s and 90s romantic comedies to understand the world and I will be writing about it until the Joes mention it in canon. I just love Trevor's whisper of "I've never gotten to this part before. Where the feelings aren't just all fun." and I am touched that you did too.

      They're so so in love!! "trevor feeling like they’re trading vows i am WEEPING." It sounds like I made you cry (at least internally) a lot reading this scene and I can't say I'm sorry about it! It feels so H$ to me that they would skip right over the "I love you" and straight to the "forever." They're very all or nothing type people, once they are certain and determined about something - like they are with each other.

      Thank you so so much again for these wonderful comments! You truly made me so happy! <3

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