Comment on Second Chances

  1. Myrielin on Chapter 1 Tue 20 Aug 2024 06:38PM UTC

    There was so many people speaking about this fanfic so here I am, I've got to know what's this about and where this'll go.

    In true, I'm not very fan of fics written in first pov because people generally end up going to much into the emotion, but like, the chapter was really well-written and it was pretty well-balanced in term of feelings, memories and description. It was really fluid to read and that's so freaking pleasant.

    Also I liked at the end that Macaque rejected the proposition. That's something that don't come up in a lot of fic and it was nice to see one where he does feel guilty about his treatment of MK.

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