Comment on I am Creation (Both Haunted and Holy)

  1. Comment kudos! I enjoyed the chapter a lot ^_^

    This in particular absolutely killed me idk why - “Percy was pretty sure Kelli had had a thing for Luke Castellan. Luke had that effect on people – even donkey-legged vampires”

    Also ….. Percy immediately gravitating towards Nemo as a name is so in character. It’s good of him to avoid trademark issues by picking something else though xD

    Typo I noticed - “ He wasn't even sure undead sabertooth kitten's could get diseases” kittens shouldn’t have an apostrophe to be plural there

    Thanks for the new chapter! I’m looking forward to the next update :D

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