“She made a mental note that she’d have to plan ahead to charge her camera battery. Which was… somewhere around here.” If this isn’t a vibe, then I don’t know what a vibe is. Finding newly packed stuff after moving is a nightmareeee.
How did I just KNOW that the shower wouldn’t be hot, noooo, poor Agatha.
“This was her fresh start. She didn’t have to share it with anyone unless she wanted to.” YESSSSS we stan someone who up-and-leaves a stressful situation to start a new life as a stranger in a completely opposite world YES QUEEN.
I loooove the idea of the little notebook at the end of this chapter and I hope that becomes a running theme. I always adore your word choice and the way you write your OCs. I can already tell how Agatha sort of “is” just in this short first chapter!
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HarmlessGhosty on Chapter 1 Tue 20 May 2025 02:43PM UTC
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