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  1. solarsthoughts on Chapter 1 Wed 02 Jul 2025 12:51PM UTC

    OMG I AM SO HOOKED AHDJSJDJ
    This was amazing. The action, the emotions, the description of injuries and everyone’s reactions… oh my god you did so so good!! I was just so on edge the entire time, almost as stressed as the flight 😭 I love the way you wrote all of this so so much and I can’t wait to see where this is going!!

    Also *cough cough* I happen to know a lot about medicine so if you need help or want feedback on the medical side of things… feel free to let me know. I’d be super happy to help! :)

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    1. ObsidianPegasus on Chapter 1 Thu 03 Jul 2025 03:35AM UTC

      😭😭 thank you SO MUCH!!! You have no idea how much this means to me—seriously, I was losing my mind wondering if this chapter was Too Much™ or just plain terrible 💀 I'm so glad the descriptions and emotions hit the way I hoped!! And it means so much that you felt on edge with the flight; I worked really hard on that tension…

      And honestly if it’s not too much trouble I would like some help with the medical stuff because writing this was basically just googling EVERYTHING and asking my friends “okay, but what does it feel like to *really* break a bone???” 💀

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      1. solarsthoughts on Chapter 1 Thu 03 Jul 2025 04:50AM UTC

        You're so welcome! You deserve the compliments, and please know I mean every word xx Your writing in this was amazing

        And yess, feel free to ask anything at all! :) I've got a suggestion for this chapter as well if you wanted to make it a bit more accurate (obviously feel free to say no lol, no pressure). I can message you about it on Tumblr if you want?

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        1. ObsidianPegasus on Chapter 1 Thu 03 Jul 2025 04:54AM UTC

          Sure you can, but I’m at school right now and tumblr is blocked so I’ll probably see it after a few hours 😭

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          1. solarsthoughts on Chapter 1 Thu 03 Jul 2025 05:01AM UTC

            Aaah no worries :)

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