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  1. Wolf_fox123 on Chapter 1 Thu 11 Sep 2025 12:57AM UTC

    YIPPEEERR ANOTHER FORSAKEN X DOD CROSSOVER FIC!

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    1. Western_Soup on Chapter 1 Thu 11 Sep 2025 04:11AM UTC

      Another? I made this because I couldn't find any, please share the title and author of this other one, I would be greatly interested. Also, have you any ideas for chapters? I'm doing this as I go along and have 0 plan whatsoever.

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      1. Wolf_fox123 on Chapter 1 Thu 11 Sep 2025 01:09PM UTC

        Sorry for late reply, but the other fic Ive found is called Die of Forsaken by Leafcereal, currently it just has one chapter but I think the author is gonna post another chapter soon. For ideas, I’m currently reading the second chapter but I suggest the forsaken survivors have a small meeting of some sort to discuss about the new killer and that note Spectre has gave them before getting put into another round with a different killer. I also can’t wait to see the civilian reaction with John Doe, 1x, and Noli. Especially 1x since he’s the only killer who can freeze the survivors mid chase using entangled

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        1. Wolf_fox123 on Chapter 1 Thu 11 Sep 2025 02:43PM UTC

          Okay, just finished the second chapter, I really like the way you write it. Genuinely enjoy that you gave the civilians actual names instead of their ability names. Nice detail to keep. Judging by the notes, I like on how you made them unaware that they’re able to respawn. It would be an interesting if the next killer is Slasher due to the fact he’s actually an robloxian instead of your usual monster. But ofc, it’s your story to choose who’s next in line. For the killers pov, it would be nice to see them discussing about the sudden change of survivors and perhaps map? Assuming that the forsaken killers are also aware of new maps/updates just like their survivors. And according to Pursurer pov, he’s aware that the glass house isn’t the same as the one in dod. Again, this is your story, you don’t have to take the idea if you don’t like it :D

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          1. Western_Soup on Chapter 1 Fri 12 Sep 2025 05:24AM UTC

            Thank you for the kind words and ideas. You don't know how much I appreciate them! (Unless you've written a fic you have no idea what you should do with) That was kinda the plan for the next chapter or two, I just don't know who to put the civilians up against next. Expect the next chapter sometime sunday, unless I procrastinate too much.

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            1. Wolf_fox123 on Chapter 1 Fri 12 Sep 2025 06:05AM UTC

              Alright then, you’re welcome! If you need any more ideas just let me know. Can’t wait to read the next chapter

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