WAAAAAH. cheong mun being so protective of his chung myung because that's his BABY. omg i nearly shed a tear, that scene was so heartwarming. especially chung jin's part because that's his younger sahyung. the entire sect ordering around amjon because they all adore their little troublemaker, even oh dahye was wary of him, god!! i love hwasan being over-protective of chung myung, i swear it heals something in me everytime i read this. (i read those parts over and over again.) T-T
ALSO TANG BO HEADING STRAIGHT TO ASK FOR PERMISSION FOR MARRIAGE?? HOLD YOUR HORSES OH MY GOD, YOU BOTH AREN'T EVEN DATING?!!? valid reaction from cheong mun and chung jin. also valid pathetic tang bo, it's canon.
and of course, chung myung being completely oblivious about it, thinking he was just asking for permission to hang out like they're both 10. 😭😭
speaking of canon, i can't get over how novel-like this fic is? from the dialogue, to the thoughts, the personalities and the entire narration? you've got it down to a tee author. it's like you put a lil spin on canon tangcheong and boom. they ended up being yearners. i really like this fic so much, it's kinda insane.
“I came hurriedly because I missed my Hyung-nim. Did you not miss your little brother?”
“Brat, you’re not being cute at all. Stop that.”
I WILL VOMIT BLOOD NOT TANG BO TRYING TO AEGYO HIS WAY INTO HIS HYUNG'S HEART???? this fic will be my death.
Chung Myung looked at him in disbelief. “You ran away?”
“Yeah.”
“Why?”
“...There’s important things to do in Mount Hua.”
oh my god , i love this bit, the ellipsis in the dialogue had me imagining him nervously averting his eyes and trying not to answer and that was so funny i'm positively on the floor.
the patients... demon flower? i can feel the angst coming already ;-;
thankyou so much for writing this, off i go to read the rest!
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bluemingtill5_53 on Chapter 3 Sat 20 Sep 2025 01:24PM UTC
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