Chapter Text
First draft (The was supposed to be half of chapter 6)
I was terrified this woman now trying to It me!? I didn't know What to do The others from the Almost comission would come back Soon if i tried to kill her the Alchemy Commission will come and find out I'm just acting and if i tried to escape She will Just grab me again and i very much don't want that woman holding me again! I should quickly put my pants on. it was getting cold by each second. i stare at her.
(END OF DRAFT 1)
Second draft (chapter 7?)
I put my pants on and then noticed that the woman was stepping back in fear. So, I looked up and saw cold foggy mist surrounding me. I knew that i was colder than most people since i used the ice element. "What the hell?" The woman had yelled out again when she is the one who tries to sexually assault me! I snapped my head around, and then i heard Footsteps "Yanqing!, yanqing!"Another a very familiar voice yells out.
(END OF SECOND DRAFT)
Third draft (Idk chapter 7 still ig?)
"General...!" I mumbled under my breath
With hatred. I absolutely hated him, but for my acting, i looked up it him with teary eyes, "G-general! your here Please listen to me this woman was trying to sexually assault me please belive me im telling the truth" I was well as telling the truth becouse leak like that its on out I was in fear as well she touched me in a way which actually made me want to cry.
(END OF THIRD DRAFT)
(IM TOO DAMN LAZY TO DO THE FOURTH DRAFT WHICH IS THE LAST ONE.)