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2026-01-04
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0 A.M (In the morning and after her inexistence)

Chapter 2: What now?

Summary:

A girl grieves someone who never existed as if She was God.

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(See the end of the chapter for notes.)

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Her long black hair swept through the wind as she sat on a bench in thought. Homura stared right into the sun, hoping to discern the face of her beloved. She knew that Madoka truly did stare back, but it was all too hard to believe when all that she saw was a river, grass, and leaves in the wind. It’s not like she could hear her voice either, for all the sound was the rushing of water, the rustling of leaves, and the chatter of people passing by. But she truly was there, just too far to see.

Without Madoka, she felt shackled to the Earth, and her God, Madoka, is the only one who can free her. Homura shook her head, why would she ever think that someone as weak as her deserved the grace of someone as wonderful as Madoka.

She closed her eyes tightly, sorting through her memories of Madoka, for the only thing worse than this fate was forgetting Her. Tears began to stream from her eyes from the sting of staring at the sun, and her immense grief. One single word fell onto deaf ears, teary, shaky, and full of love; “Madoka…”.

Homura took the ribbon from her hair, opening her eyes to treasure it. She held it close to her, wishing that the previous owner of the ribbon existed again. What was she going to do now? Her sole reason for being is gone, and she is in an even more pathetic state than ever before.

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All constructive criticism is welcome; I aim to enjoy writing and put out a good product as well.

All bot and hate comments will be deleted.

I hope you enjoy!

I hope the description is a little better here since I had more to work with, and really tried my best. But unfortunately, describing people has always been my weak spot, and I tend to over explain what a character is feeling as well. (I blame that one self indulgent self insert fic I was doing in my documents, and myself by extension). But characters are where I shine, and I hope I truly shine enough to have someone enjoy my work, and have said work be good.

Notes:

All constructive criticism is welcome; I aim to enjoy writing and put out a good product as well.

All bot and hate comments will be deleted.

I hope you enjoy!

I know it's a little over dramatic. There wasn't much I could do with a character who can't have a physical body, and a setting in (literal) no where, either way I hope I did a good enough. Again, any criticism is appreciated.

Enjoy your day!