First chapter of the rewrite is up!
PLease go and show it some love!!! It's in the series btw
Things I plan to do
Make it more obvious Morro is trans
Make Morro less aware of his age (he's younger than original tho)
He's more of a mess in general (Wow is that even possible?)
Better writing style
More consistent characterization
I won't spoil anymore for you ;)
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