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1. Glowstickia on Chapter 1 Mon 18 Sep 2017 08:44PM UTC

   

   *screams* and the fun part is, if people just want to keep scrolling they can look at the work as a whole
   or go chapter by chapter just...god so proud *sniffs*

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2. whytho on Chapter 1 Tue 19 Sep 2017 11:07PM UTC

   

   I HAVE ALREADY TALKED ABOUT WHY I LIKE THIS SO MUCH OR MAYBE NOT I PUT IT IN MY QUEUE BUT. NOW I WILL TALK PAGE BY PAGE ABOUT MY LOVE OF THIS.
   PG ONE -- suzy???? with freckles????? in /my/ town????????? it's more likely and wonderful than you think
   the setup of this page kinda reminds me of the comic papergirls? which has a very different plot but it is also good and makes me happy to think of
   isabel laughin..... what a gal.... i love her.....
   NEXT PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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3. 1. monstrblood on Chapter 1 Wed 20 Sep 2017 01:14AM UTC

      

      you read papergirls??? thats partly what inspired this!!! im so happy someone noticed its been such a big influence on my stories and art!!

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4. whytho on Chapter 2 Tue 19 Sep 2017 11:10PM UTC

   

   things i love:
   collin.... his hair...... his chub,....,,.... the elastic he's holding? is such a little detail but such a nice one like. i really like that.
   dimitriiiiii that cool kid. his hair looks great dude
   and suzy!!!! such a dynamic pose, like she looks like such a kid and it's a really good opening for her, with shoes untied and shoulders kinda tilted and on her bike, looking up? i just really like that

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5. Glowstickia on Chapter 3 Mon 18 Sep 2017 08:56PM UTC

   

   i love...how you draw dimitri
   his hair is raaaaad

   Let her go Collin, her gay heart ignores all the laws

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6. 1. monstrblood on Chapter 3 Mon 18 Sep 2017 09:03PM UTC

      

      collin: logic, facts
      suzy: (riding into the night) SHUT UP

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7. whytho on Chapter 3 Tue 19 Sep 2017 11:13PM UTC

   

   COLLIN IS LEGIT ONE OF THE BEST CHARACTERS IN THE OG COMIC AND THIS ONE HE'S SO FUNNY
   ad you got both him and dimitri really.. in character? even with the like two pages they're in, it's really clear /who/ they are, yknow?
   suzy in glasses is silly and great
   that line to show her movement? it's like really simple but so effective, and really shows ow you use lines her like, they're all purposeful? but don't immediately look it, if that makes any sense
   again, COLLIN AND DIMITRI ARE FANTASTIC!!! love those boys

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8. Glowstickia on Chapter 4 Mon 18 Sep 2017 08:58PM UTC

   

   I LOVE the transitions. Like its not panels but the gate is its own panel as is the pine trees and just gooosh its so neat!!!

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9. whytho on Chapter 4 Tue 19 Sep 2017 11:14PM UTC

   

   i love how u used space here, with both the fence and hands and like the leaves, and using the cutoff for night?? v good
   SUZY IN GLASSES. SHE'S A NERD. WHAT THE HECKKK

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10. 1. monstrblood on Chapter 4 Wed 20 Sep 2017 01:27AM UTC

       

       thank you!!! this ended up being one of my fav pages, i think im gonna try to do panelling like this more often because its a lot of work but a lot of fun!! and i like to think suzy uses her sunglasses to keep dust out of her eyes while shes biking really fast??? so theyre not just for decoration yknow !

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11. silkskin on Chapter 4 Thu 28 Sep 2017 10:33PM UTC

    

    OH WOW THE COMPOSITION HERE'S GORGEOUS!!!
    i am LOVING your art style and writing, it's really lovely and,,, atmospheric?? im getting like, 80s vibes and it's super cool

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12. 1. monstrblood on Chapter 4 Fri 29 Sep 2017 10:32PM UTC

       

       tysm!!!! my arts never been called atmospheric before!! and yea 80s vibes was kinda what i was going for since i was thinking about those ghost adventure kid lit books that were all written in the 80s and 90s

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13. whytho on Chapter 5 Tue 19 Sep 2017 11:17PM UTC

    

    that pysch-up is the biggest mood out there like yeah suzy, we know how you feel. i love that way suzy's arm is one smooth line but then her jacket, while still smooth, has all these visible creases and is clearly /weighted/ bc that something that looks great in all your clothes. like, your sweaters and stuff look very comfy. and the shot of the ghost house is all creepy and lovely!!

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14. whytho on Chapter 6 Tue 19 Sep 2017 11:19PM UTC

    

    oof izzy's hair! niceee..
    OH SUZY, FORGET ABOUT THE PYSCH-UP THOSE GAY FEELS ARE THE BIGGEST MOOD OUT THERE
    your suzy is all?? not like ooc, just.... different without the activty club? and like i love it because i adore suzy being characterized with all those facets to her character.

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15. whytho on Chapter 7 Tue 19 Sep 2017 11:21PM UTC

    

    I love the first an last shots of this, with suzy giving her something and then izzy giving /her/ something it's just this nice little bit of.... i dunno equality? standing on equal ground? equivalent exchange? u feel me
    also: i love the way you draw hands

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16. whytho on Chapter 8 Tue 19 Sep 2017 11:23PM UTC

    

    that shot of suze? makes her look so young like jeez they're all kiddos....
    AND YES ISABEL!!! WHO WOULDNT DATE A GIRL FOR THOSE STICKERS????

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17. Glowstickia on Chapter 9 Mon 18 Sep 2017 08:59PM UTC

    

    Suzy found dead. More about the news at 11. Back to you Izzy.

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18. whytho on Chapter 9 Tue 19 Sep 2017 11:25PM UTC

    

    NVM THISSSS IS THE BIGGEST MOOD, JUST ALL OF IT. SEEING REALLY WELL DRAWN HANDS? MOOD. HEARTS ON LETTERS? MOOD. BLUSHING UNCONTROLLABLY? MOOD. THIS WHOLE THING????? MOOOOOD.

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19. SpectrumWriting on Chapter 10 Tue 19 Sep 2017 08:42PM UTC

    

    <333333 this was adorable and i'm definitely bookmarking it.

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20. 1. monstrblood on Chapter 10 Wed 20 Sep 2017 01:32AM UTC

       

       thank youuuuuu that makes me so happy!!

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21. whytho on Chapter 10 Tue 19 Sep 2017 11:29PM UTC

    

    1) ffFFFFFFUCK ISABEL'S GRAMPA
    2) izzy, i love u. and that characterization of her. and just??? all of her???? the hair??
    3) the way the first two panels do the.... background thing, i dunno what it's called, is really cool and like... reminiscent of those type of shots where they're lost in the darkness? which kinda makes me have to go back to point number, really
    and like?? you were so concise with this?? it was only nine pages, but so detailed, had a definite narrative and plot structure, was sweet and gay, beautiful art....... it's just really good!!!!!!
    THANK YOU. SO MUCH. I /LOVE/ THIS. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!

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22. whisperunicornrainbow on Chapter 10 Sat 23 Sep 2017 12:40AM UTC

    

    THIS IS SO GREAT AND SO TALENTED AND CHARMING AND SWEET AND CUTE AAAAAHHHHH

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23. malatruse on Chapter 10 Tue 26 Sep 2017 02:20AM UTC

    

    hell yeah! love it!

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24. Account Deleted on Chapter 10 Wed 27 Sep 2017 05:06PM UTC

    This is really sweet and cute and I love it!!!!!

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25. silkskin on Chapter 10 Thu 28 Sep 2017 10:38PM UTC

    

    OH THAT WAS LOVELY, i looooove your style!!
    thanks for writing! or rather, drawing!!

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