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Part 1 of Tin Roof
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Prompt 3.4: Tin
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2019-07-15
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200
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Laws of Silence

Summary:

Zayn and Louis get caught in the rain on a walk through the woods and seek shelter.

Notes:

This is part of a Wordplay prompt challenge for the prompt "tin".

I really wanted to write a drabble for this one, and with the help of my precious, ruthless Marigold actually got it down to 100 words, but I just loved this longer version better. I'm stubborn though, so I also did a true drabble companion piece from Louis' point of view. Thank you to Maggie and Sage and Shannon and Sarah for helping me choose.

They're not really a series, per se, but I posted them that way so I could have the satisfaction of the nice round 200 and 100 word counts. I couldn't help myself.

Thank you for indulging my stubbornness and I hope you enjoy both little nibbles!

The titles for each work in this series are pulled from "Cat on a Hot Tin Roof" (I know I know but I regret nothing).

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

Work Text:

A raindrop splats against Zayn’s steel cigarette case. Stainless. He stills, unlit cigarette dangling. Memories flash, licking at his mind as the rain licks at his skin.

He and Louis. A forest path. A crack of thunder. A split second. Downpour. Startled laughs. Soaked shirts. Running. Seeking shelter. Tin sheet on knobby branches. Chasing. Reaching. Cover. Exhales. Laughter. Fingers raked through soaked hair. Glistening cheeks. Bright eyes. Deep. Blue. 

Zayn tilts his head back, eyes closed. The memories slow. He inhales calmly, light rain tickling his face.

It was heavier that day. Pounded on the tin roof, angry at being kept out. So loud it drowned out every other sound. Louis’ laugh. Louis’ swearing. His own thoughts. His own heart thudding – he'd only felt that.

Only saw Louis.

He didn’t notice the steps he took towards him. Hadn't been aware of the thoughts commanding the steps.

He wasn’t there. Then he was. Simple as that. 

So close. Wet face, beaming. Licked lips, parted. No time. No thought. No words.

One kiss.

Sudden. Soft. Certain. 

Done. 

“Zayn!” 

A kiss. 

“What you doing outside in this rain, love?”

Familiar lips.

“Let’s get inside, Z.” 

Simple. 

“Louis and Harry are on their way.”

Notes:

Thank you for reading! Hope you enjoyed, and that you'll take a quick peak at the companion piece, which is a proper drabble, from Louis' POV. The tumblr post for both is here.

To read the amazing fics that were written by the others on this prompt, click here, and to see all fics written as part of the challenge (including years 1 and 2), click here. You can also find the masterpost for this year’s challenge here.

Thank you to fest organizer lululawrence! <33

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