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My Ice

Summary:

Ice is detrimental to burns
A poem from Xingqiu's point of view :]

Notes:

(See the end of the work for notes.)

Work Text:

Were you aware putting ice on burns is bad?
the benefits are left to merely a wives tale
providing temporary relief but leaving tissue more damaged and worsening scarring,
What about you?
my darling,
would you hurt me the same if I were to hold you too close?
In an attempt at remedying
that which has wounded me since I can remember,
perhaps I must wait to be whole
before I can hold you in my arms
before I can ghost your skin with my hand
Watching you drift peacefully, wondering if you'd ever look at me in the same way
with your effortless smile,
that which brings relief
I suppose it cannot heal me,
after all you are my ice
frozen, colder than I'd ever hope
I cannot hold you as I wish
for the fear of you leaving
and scars further dirtying the skin which I have tried my hardest to keep so clean
Perhaps if I were to believe for a second longer
in these damaging wives tales that haunt my mind
you could be mine

Notes:

hello! if u read this i hope this was ok, im probably going to try and post more poetry as well as stories :] i like writing a lot but it is so daunting to post my work aa
probably/defo ooc! so you dont gotta point it out lols, i kin chongyun not xingqiu idk how to write from his pov /j
*constructive criticism is welcome as long as you are kind about it!* i am a beginner at poetry, i just find it pretty and so want to try it out