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Number the Stars

Summary:

He discovered Treasure Planet. He stopped a ruthless pirate named Ironbeard. He saved the Queen in The Battle at Parliament. Yet, despite surviving pirates, Procyons, and other natural dangers, Jim Hawkins has yet to face his greatest challenge: Fatherhood.

Eleanora “Ella” Hawkins takes after her father. With a relentless spirit and thirst for the stars, Ella is entering her first year at the Interstellar Academy. But when her vessel is attacked during a pilot training exercise and Ella kidnapped by a mysterious band of brigands, she must use all of her wits to survive an old foe that is determined to seek revenge against her parents and obtain a power that could bring the galaxy to its knees.

Notes:

(See the end of the work for other works inspired by this one.)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Notes:

This work will follow the events of the canceled Treasure Planet sequel as well as The Battle at Procyon game. To avoid spoilers, please read up on those events before engaging with this story.

Music that inspires this chapter:
- "The Hunting" by Joel Nielson

(See the end of the chapter for more notes.)

Chapter Text

Beyond the Terran Empire, at the edges of the Procyon Expanse…

 

The stars glowed brightly as a gentle breeze caught the sails of the Procyon Star Runner that evening out upon the vast oceanic plane that was the Etherium. The PSR Light Brigade was making its way back toward its home planet of Laar after having delivered cargo to one of its many outposts at the edges of the Procyon Expanse. 

The captain, a short statured man who shared the likeness of a raccoon, stood at the helm and observed the quiet skies around him. 

“Well, Sir, I think I’ll retire for the evening. Everything is in order below,” came a voice as his second officer climbed the steps to the helm to join him. 

“Very good, Jacop,” Captain Rebin nodded as his officer returned to his cabin for the night cycle aboard their vessel. 

“Perhaps you too desire rest, Captain,” his helmswoman commented beside him.

“No, Orsa, I fear I’m far too much an insomniac,” Rebin responded. 

“You’re thinking about her, again, aren’t you?” Orsa asked quietly, causing Rebin to stiffen. She wasn’t wrong. Rebin had done little else than think about his late wife the past ten days in space. It had been seven years since the Terrans had enacted their harsh penalties against the Procyon Expanse for the threat they had once posed to the Terran Queen during the Battle at Parliament. Seven years since Rebin had lost his wife to a Terran skirmish that had erupted at the very outpost he was currently returning from. An outpost that existed this side of the Terran-Procyon divide and which had seen many battles between the two superpowers. It was in the weeks following the Procyon defeat at the Battle for Parliament that the Terrans had advanced their forces, finally managing to push the Procyons into a retreat, but not before Rebin had lost her on the frontlines. 

Today the outpost was again under tentative Procyon control, and Rebin had been instructed to sail cargo to its forces. Over the course of the voyage, not a day went by that the Procyon captain didn’t think about the love of his life, wondering if she had been taken as a prisoner of war or if her vessel had been shot down. 

These past ten days had been particularly agonizing. The Procyon shipping lanes had been severely restricted due to their loss at the hands of the Terrans. Whenever Rebin set sail, he was forced to obey Terran regulation. And each time the name Terran so much as crossed someone’s lips, all he could see was his wife perishing at the hands of an empire that would never see a Procyon as anything other than a rat to be squashed. 

“I know it’s not my place, Sir,” Orsa continued at the sight of her captain’s glare. “But perhaps taking shore leave could—”

“No,” Rebin growled. What was worse than sailing under Terran regulation? Falling asleep in the cold bed that still smelled like her. “And you’re right, it is not your place.”

“My apologies, Captain,” Orsa whispered as she went back to observing the starry skies. Rebin sniffed, feeling a little guilty at his outburst, but then decided he didn’t care to apologize. He wished people would stop trying to fix him. He was broken and there was nothing more—

Their ship rocked violently to the side, throwing Orsa and Rebin across the deck. 

“What in the name of Ratec?” Orsa swore as her captain pulled her back to her feet. 

“We’re under attack!” Rebin exclaimed. “All hands to battle stations!”

“...Captain!” came the disjointed cry from the communication tube behind him. 

“What is it, Endris?” Rebin returned into the mouthpiece as he watched his crew come alive from the belly of the ship. Jacop was back on deck ordering the crew to man the buckets and douse the fire that had flared from the striking of their craft.

“I don’t see anything, Sir! Nothing’s out there!” came Endris’s panicked voice.

Rebin’s blood turned to ice, but he rolled his shoulders and swept his gaze across the open sky. Surely enough, there was no sign of another vessel or any danger that could have struck their trimaran. 

“Keep it together, Endris, and keep your eyes open. Crew to full alert. Orsa, south by southwest,” Rebin ordered. Orsa obeyed, quickly turning their vessel away from the sector where the shot had been fired. “Don’t expose our engines, but get us out of here.” His gunners were in position now, ready to fire on whatever it was that lurked unseen in the dark. “Hold fire!” Rebin commanded. Despite the crewmembers working to douse the fire from the heavy hit, the remaining Procyons settled into an uneasy silence. Rebin’s own eyes hunted the stars hungrily for the assailant.

“Show yourself, You Coward,” he breathed. 

“Sir!” Endris’s voice came once more from the communication line. “It’s a ship, Sir! It’s a—”

Before Endris could finish his sentence the starlight leeward rippled as if something had upset the very fabric of the cosmos. Orsa released a quiet gasp beside him as a glittering iron hull shimmered into view, the cloaking mechanism falling away to reveal the true might of their opponent. Rebin was unfazed by the display. He had seen the trick used many times in past skirmishes against the Terran Navy. 

“Full stop to engines,” Rebin directed his engineers as the Light Brigade slowed to a halt, cast well within the looming shadow of this extraordinary monstrosity. And a monstrosity it was. 

The vessel was none other than a Procyon ironclad submersible. The entire ship was covered in plate metal, no sails were present on this behemoth. The bow of the juggernaut curved down into a flat imposing surface that could be subjected to ramming if the need should arise but was typically used to support the gaping maw of its torpedo bay. Like two soulless eye sockets staring down the Light Brigade , Captain Rebin could see now why the Terrans had so feared Procyon advancement at one time. 

But that time had long since passed and it was a miracle a submersible existed at all now, for the Terrans had required the Procyons to melt down any and all ironclad ships as part of their war reparations. Rebin was glaring into the face of a relic. 

“Hold. Fire,” he growled at his gunners who looked skittish. Rebin knew the question weighing on everyone’s minds as he reached for the radio line attached to his helm’s mainframe controls. 

“Submersible,” he greeted via the comm. “This is Captain Rebin of the Procyon Star Runner Light Brigade . It appears you have mistakenly fired upon my ship. I shall speak to your commanding officer or your vessel will face the criminal charge of an act of treason against the Procyon Empire.”

He waited.

There came only static.

The hairs all over Rebin’s body stood at attention, but he decided to try one more time. 

“Submersible! I repeat: I will have the allegiance of your crew and—”

“Captain!” Orsa screamed as the torpedo launchers of the submersible began to glow with a fiery white light. 

“Evasive maneuvers, NOW!” Rebin shouted, but it was too late. The torpedoes launched from their holds, slamming into the PSR Light Brigade from point blank range. Rebin was once again knocked off his feet, Orsa thrown back, head cracking against gunwale, rendering her unconscious. The wheel spun on its axle as the ship rotated from the impact. Rebin could hear the screams of his crew as they were lost to the flames or thrown from the ship. He grabbed the spokes of the wheel, heaving hard against the weight to stabilize what little remained of his vessel.

“All gunners, open fire!” he roared as the night sky lit up from the barrage, but no amount of trimaran weapons fire could stop what happened next. 

The submersible entered a charge just as a predator bears down on its prey. Rebin had mere seconds to react as he cranked the wheel. For all his heightened thinking, however, nothing could prevent the inevitable desolation that occurred before his very eyes. The hull of his vessel crumpled like tinfoil under the weight of the ironclad’s prow. The deck ruptured, the boards splintering as the horrid sound of steel grinding against varnished timber reached Rebin’s ears.

“All crew to the lifeboats!” Rebin cried, but even he knew the window of escape had long since sealed shut. There was a deep resonating groan as the sails tore free from their tethers, the masts severing from their bases. Explosions erupted from the lower decks as the submersible destroyed the Light Brigade’s solar core, and still the leviathan kept coming. There was nothing left to salvage. Nowhere else to flee.

Without taking his fierce eyes off of the machine, Rebin reached into the inner pocket of his captain’s coat and withdrew the picture he kept on him at all times. Faded from years of Rebin’s handling, he brought the photograph to his lips and kissed it. One last time.

“I’m coming home, My Darling.”

 

From a distance, in the void space between sunlight and shadow, a hooded figure lowered his silver spyglass…and smiled.

Notes:

First Published: August 7th, 2022
Revised: November 30th, 2024
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I did not suspect I would ever write another fan fiction about Treasure Planet that wasn't just short stories peppered into a collection, but I've been on a huge Treasure Planet kick again and this project came to the forefront due to many different conversations I've been having with other folks in the community.

Many years ago (when I was still a young teenager), I had written a fan fiction titled Number the Stars where Jim married an old OC of mine and had a daughter. Obviously, the work was very poorly written and I didn't have half the knowledge I do today about the universe of Treasure Planet. As I improved in my craft, I took my very old drafts and began to re-write certain scenes for practice and to compare how much I'd grown as a writer. So, for several years now, I've been writing little drabbles about Jim perhaps one day becoming a father and teaching his daughter about all things nautical. As I re-wrote these scenes, a plot began to form in my mind's eye, but I didn't have the heart to pull these scenes into a fully fleshed out story until now. I drew inspiration from Velgamidragon on here since they had written a very sweet short story where Jim becomes a father. Their work is so incredible so please go give them a read and a kudos/comment!

I will try to keep this story as canonical as I can despite introducing new characters and enemies. There will be many references to the events that take place in the canceled Treasure Planet sequel and the CD game The Battle at Procyon, so if anyone would like to avoid spoilers, I would recommend reading up on those events before engaging with this fic. In keeping with canon, I have also interpreted that Jim would end up with Kate Blake (the lost heroine from the canceled sequel) as I really love the little bit we do know about Kate and we have no other information on Jim's relationships or possible lack thereof.

Finally, I have rated this work as T for teenagers, as it will deal with some level of violence (as is seen in this prologue here), but I will do my best to keep this as true to the heart of Disney as possible and refrain from describing said violence in great detail. I want to keep this story heartwarming and in the spirit of Treasure Planet.

As always, I am very open to feedback and constructive criticism! Thank you to all of my readers! - EH6