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Turnabout Big Top: When the Curtains Fall

Summary:

remember that case that everyone has universally decided is the worst in the phoenix wright trilogy? well. i, unfortunately, like it a lot. so much so that i've decided to rewrite it! new and improved! now featuring:
- NO LOVE TRIANGLE!!1
- maximillion galactica gets way worse
- benjamin woodman actually matters to the story
- moe properly grieves the death of his best friend (regina still does not, though)
- the plot twist is different and not stupid
- no happy ending :(

i've written this story to somewhat mimic the ace attorney gameplay style, so written kind of in phoenix's perspective. internal dialogue yippee! im gonna type out the dates and collecting evidence pieces and whatnot. the dialogue is in script format because it's easy. this isn't really a novel, the writing isn't that good...i just wanted to get the hyperfixation brain worms out of my head sorry
still, however.
SPOILERS FOR THE CANON CASE OF TURNABOUT BIG TOP. read with caution. some of it stays the same.

Notes:

let us set the stage, shall we? the moment of the murderer from the perspective of our defendant, max galactica.

Chapter 1: Setting the Stage

Notes:

(See the end of the chapter for notes.)

Chapter Text

December 27, 10:12 PM

Berry Big Circus

Lodging House Plaza

Russell knelt on the ground over a mysterious brown box almost half the size of him. Max leans over to peer down, hoping to get a peek at whatever had been stressing the ringmaster out all night.

 

Max: So? What on earth is it, anyway?

Russell: …We’re about to find out.

Max: (He doesn’t even know?! Then what could there possibly be to stress about?)

Max: Quit worrying, won’t you? It’s bad for the heart, Russell.

 

Russell only sighs in response, leaving Max’s comment hanging in the air. There had been multiple failed attempts from the magician all night to make conversation, hoping to bring up that idea that he’d been meaning to tell. But Russell wouldn’t budge. Nothing more than one-word answers and dismissive sighs, anyway. What a fabulously dreary night.

After staring at the box in uncomfortably prolonged silence, Russell moves shaking hands to the clasps to finally open it.

 

Max: Sweetie, what are you shaking for?

 

What the hell could be inside to have Russell shaking like that? A pit of dread formed in Max’s stomach. Obviously, there was something Russell wasn’t telling him–hell, he’d hardly spoken all night. But something was wrong.

And before Max could even process what was happening, something shot down inches away from Max’s face, tearing his hat off of his head. Russell slumped over the box when the thing hit the back of his neck with an uncomfortable crack. Was that— Max’s own trophy?!

 

???: Whuh–WHAT?!

 

Somebody was shouting. Max looked up to see Moe peeking out of the open window to his room. Tears well up in his eyes as he looks in mild shock at Russell's body, then Max. Back and forth a couple of times as he tried to process what was happening. Truthfully, Max was doing the exact same thing. Not that Moe would believe it.

 

Moe: Russell–? Is he—did you…WHAT DID YOU DO?!?!!

 

Russell is dead, and Moe thinks he’s just caught Max in the act.

Max’s ears are ringing. He starts sputtering out some denial that he can hardly hear over his heart beating in his chest. Moe continues to shout, all of it is for naught. Max is hyperventilating, shaking his head frantically, and…it isn’t even a conscious choice, really, when his legs begin to carry him away from the crime scene in a quick jog. 

Maximillian Galactica continues to run until he spots the flashing red and blue in the distance.

Notes:

short first chapter sry guys...!! they wont all be this short lol i just needed to have a little opening sequence. im planning to split it into maybe 3 chapters per segment? like 3 chapters for investigation 1 so on and so forth. don't hold me to that btw im writing this all as i go that will probably change