Chapter 1: A Mother's Worry
Chapter Text
Mrs Heywood watched her Husband
Pacing outside
She sighed
A regular occurrence
Since Charlotte returned
Sadness in her eyes
Subdued
She tried hiding it
But A Mother Can Tell
Initially, Letters from Sanditon flowed
Charlotte ignored them
Stored unopened in her trunk
She began disappearing from the house
Preferring solitude
Her Papa took it badly
Waiting for her to return home
A month before Christmas
Mrs Heywood decided to act
She wrote to Mary Parker
Two Weeks Later
Charlotte walked up the path
Stopped Suddenly
A Carriage
She recognised it, from months ago
Steeling herself, Charlotte continued into the house
Chapter 2: A Mother's Solution
Summary:
Thank you for the encouragement!
As promised, here is the next part, where we discover who has arrived.
And a question – I do have ideas for Letters between Mrs H & Mary Parker, what do we think??!
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Hearing voices in the Parlour
Creeping past
Charlotte, please greet our Guests
Two Visitors
Mary and
SIDNEY!
Let us find that recipe, Mrs Parker
Sidney stood up
He looked thinner too
I apologise for any intrusion, Miss Heywood
Mary received your Mama’s Letter
She begged me to fight
Knowing of your unhappiness was unbearable
The final push I needed
To crave your forgiveness
Vow to make amends
With your permission
The Ladies return thirty minutes later
Mrs Heywood notes the delightful flush on her daughter’s face
Her hand clasped tightly in Mr Parker’s
She smiles
A Mother Always Knows Best
Chapter 3: The First Letter
Summary:
Continuing this Drabble Story with a series of Letters exchanged between Willingden and Sanditon
Starting with the first letter that Mrs Heywood sent to Mary Parker
I can definitely imagine a few more chapters.
Notes:
(See the end of the chapter for notes.)
Chapter Text
Heywood Manor
Dear Mrs Parker,
I send our greetings from Willingden, Sussex (not in the Weald) and trust you are in good health.
Our eldest daughter, Charlotte, recently returned to us from her extended stay in Sanditon as your guest.
It appears to have been a most diverting experience.
However, my current concern (as a mother) is Charlotte’s wellbeing - she is most dispirited, I suspect a possible heartbreak?
I would be forever grateful for any confidences you may feel able to share as her hostess during her stay.
Charlotte is unaware of any communication between us.
Yours Truly,
Anne Heywood
Notes:
Letter writing was a key part of Regency Life, it is how we know so much about Jane Austen’s life, despite the destruction of some of them.
https://janeausten.co.uk/blogs/home-and-hearth/regency-letter-writing?srsltid=AfmBOopRghxJsYoybvtgqfAIoM5kOfwCaPzgwSB44ZFVZeEHeRfxhEnd
https://randombitsoffascination.com/2022/11/15/a-touch-of-quill-and-ink-regency-letter-writing/?cn-reloaded=1
https://thelondonletters.com/blogs/news/regencylettersandhowtomakeyourown?srsltid=AfmBOoq565skwbzWsXnFMPAx7-OSo5So09K6F8a3--rIso0Jk_QmQLpB
Chapter 4: The Reply
Summary:
After such an amazing month of writing, I needed a little rest!
Thank you again to everyone who has written, read and encouraged us.
These Drabble Stories have more in store, so let’s continue.Here is the next Letter – it’s a reply from Mary Parker
Chapter Text
Trafalgar House, Sanditon
Dear Mrs Heywood,
I am most grateful for your recent letter and send my regards to your family.
Charlotte was a most delightful guest in our home, held in great affection by all who met her.
It saddens me to hear of her melancholy, especially as (in confidence) the actions of my own family are directly responsible. Please be assured that the utmost remorse is felt by a particular individual.
I have written several letters to Charlotte, waiting in vain for a reply, which I confess is undeserved. She is such a brave young woman.
Mary Parker
Chapter 5: Mrs Heywood Is Concerned
Summary:
Mary’s frankness was quite shocking, although I think she would have found it difficult to lie to Mrs Heywood, especially considering her own fondness for Charlotte and the guilt she struggled with. Plus, having to live daily with the nightmare of her husband congratulating himself.
Understandably, Mrs Heywood is wondering what on earth happened!
Notes:
(See the end of the chapter for notes.)
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Dear Mary,
I appreciate your empathetic tone, but feel we have progressed past cordial politeness.
Charlotte continues in her despondency; Alison (her sister) has confided that letters received remain unopened.
Please forgive me: is there any connection between the fire we heard about and the earlier return home of our daughter?
My suspicions of unrequited romance appear confirmed. Our hopes of Charlotte finding a suitable match In Sanditon are disappointed. It horrifies me to imagine Charlotte forced into servitude, such as a governess.
I pray that any obstacles relating to this unknown suitor may be resolved in time.
Anne Heywood.
Notes:
We see Charlotte state at the infamous Pineapple Luncheon that she is not in Sandtion to find a husband, However, it is virtually certain that her parents allowed her to go because they had hopes that she would encounter a wider 'pool' of prospects. At the age of 22, she is on the older side of eligible young ladies and if any arrangement with a local Willingden estate had existed, she would already have been married. There is no way she would have been permitted to go to Sanditon as an engaged young lady, only in the realms of fantasy!
Also, in the fragment, she is not the eldest child and has at least one older brother. With such a large family, it would have been essential for the daughters to marry for financial security, such was the world of Austen/ Becoming a governess was a last resort and not the glamorous role it is made out to be, hence the horror of Jane Fairfax in Emma. Any suggestion that Austen would have treated her heroine so poorly is frankly, ridiculous and crosses the line into Regency Fantasy.
Background Reading which I have found useful;
Godmersham Park - Gill Hornby
My Dearest Miss Fairfax - Jeanette Watts
Jane Austen At Home - Lucy Worsley
Chapter 6: I Decided To Take A Stand
Summary:
So obviously, Mrs Heywood took the direct approach, after receiving Mary’s Letter!
This is more of a ‘bridge’ Chapter, as she waits to hear from Sanditon and considers her actions.
Notes:
(See the end of the chapter for notes.)
Chapter Text
Mrs Heywood nervously waited for a reply
Had she written too frankly?
Seeing Charlotte so despondent bolstered her courage
Several times, Anne attempted a conversation with her daughter
It was clearly unwelcome
Preferring Solitude
With her Papa’s beloved copy of Heraclitus
Desperate, Mrs Heywood perused the Gossip Columns
The only interesting item: a recent Betrothal
Which appeared to be unhappily made
At last, A Letter arrived
It seemed bulkier than usual
A separate communication was hidden inside the first
Mrs Heywood was intrigued
Then she caught sight of a few words Mary had written
I Decided To Take A Stand
Notes:
A Little Extra!
Mrs Heywood’s Reading Material
Dear Gentle Readers,
The Author of This Column does so appreciate a Love Story
Especially when two ‘Soulmates’ are Reunited after time apart
Such Happy News!
An Engagement and Impending NuptialsAnd Yet
It seems all is not blooming in The Garden
As we know, Roses bear Thorns
Which can cause significant pain
If You’re Not CarefulRather than Beautiful Butterflies fluttering about Our Future Bride and Groom
There appear to be Buzzing Creatures of the stinging variety
Most PuzzlingRest Assured
We are watching further developments most carefully
Will They
Or Won’t They??Only Time Will Tell
Chapter 7: A Confession
Summary:
Here’s the next Letter that Mrs Heywood reads
Really hoping to manage more regular updates, although that depends on a lot of other factors not in my control.
Chapter Text
Dear Anne,
My apologies for the delay, be assured I remain determined to assist you.
First, A Confession. In the strictest confidence.
My hopes for a closer connection between our families were ruined through the hubris of my husband’s actions and unwillingness to acknowledge blame.
Our family suddenly faced financial and social disaster. The solution meant heartbreak for two people close to my heart.
I told myself it was the only way. But, living with such guilt began to destroy my equilibrium. Your letters gave me courage. I decided to take a stand.
Please read the enclosed communication.
Mary Parker.
Chapter 8: That Fateful Day
Summary:
Here’s an update for another Drabble Story
Recap – Mrs Heywood is concerned about her daughter’s wellbeing and writes o Mary Parker for advice
Chapter Text
Mrs Heywood was quite shocked at the contents of Mary’s latest epistle.
She thought back to that fateful day of The Accident
How she wished Mr T Parker had gone to the ‘other’ Willingden
What a ridiculous man!
How despicable, to risk his family’s future
And shameful, to abdicate responsibility
Her beloved husband had been entirely correct in his reluctance to permit Charlotte’s expedition
If only she had followed Her Papa’s advice
Be careful of everything
Too late for regrets now
She carefully unfolded the second letter
Catching her breath at a particular phrase
I beg permission to make amends
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