Chapter 1: Disclaimer
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This book isn't to hurt anyone on religious basis. I am myself a proud Hindu who adores the mahabharatha. This is just a small take on the Mahabharatha.
Points to be known
> All the characters are grey and will be shown as grey
> Karna will fight on the path of Dharma
>Draupadi will marry only the five pandavas
>Karna will not be as loyal to Durydhona and will be the King of Magdha and Anga due to his valour.
>He will not get any curses as the Parashurama knows who he is before itself.
>Karn will not have any other wives except the fmc
>He will not participate during Draupadi's swayamvar saying that she is like a sister to him
>The events will be different from the canon Mahabharat
> I will accept constructive critiscim but not any blantant hatred
> I will block you if you comment hate on my books
WITH THAT
JAI SHREE KRISHNA
Chapter 2: CHARACTERS
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Rajkumari Anika :
The diamond of Panchal and the darling of Panchal, Dwarka, Mathura and Hastinapur. The younger sister of Draupadi and Dhristyumma and daughter of Drupad and Prishati. She is known as Yagyaseni, Krishnaa and Aishwarya. She is the most adored princess of all the Kingdoms and is the most beautiful lady to walk the earth during Dwapar-Yug.
"I am willing to marry Maharaj Karna"
Maharaj Karna:
The infamous warrior king of Anga and Magdha. He is known to be a good king for his subjects and has a vision for his kingdom. The adopted son of Adhiratha and Radha and actual son of Suryadev and Kunti. He is known as Radheya, Vasusena, Suryaputra, Vaikartana and Daanveer. He is a well-known king known for not having any weaknesses and is the most handsome man in Dwapar Yug after Krishna.
"You may say anything to me Durydhona, but one word to my wife and I'll make sure that you'll plead for death"
Chapter 3: Chapter-1: The birth of 3 blessed souls
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Panchal, a state known for it's fire was holding a yagya for revenge The people of the Kingdom were burning with anger as they thought of the Pandavas and how the five men were able to take down the most valourous soldiers of Panchal..
The Maharaj of the state, Drupad was fuming with anger while thinking of how he lost half of his kingdom to a worthless man such as Ashwathama through the great Arjuna. He knew that Arjuna was a great archer and a great warrior, but he did not realise the extent of greatness that Arjuna had. His thoughts focussed on ruining the Kuru Clan due to the utter humilation they put him and his kingdom through. He didn't blame his eldest daughter Shrikhandi for losing aganist the Pandavas since he personally knew how valourous they were and how skilled they were at manipulating the war to work for them only. Drupad sat in the yagya hall beside his chief queen Prishati waiting for the great priest to begin the yagya. The priest had finally arrived, apologising to the king, saying that he had lost the sense of time while being with his family after many months. The kind-hearted King just nodded his head and asked ther pandit to begin the yagya.
As they did the yagya, Drupad's mind was filled with revenge. He wished for a son who would more skilled and valourous than the Pandavas and a daughter who, upon entering the Kuru Clan with her mere footprint, would cause the chaos and destruction of the Kuru Clan. The priest, sensing what Drupad was thinking, smirked in his head. This yagya would not only bring the two that Drupad wished for, but also another person who would be a blessing to Panchal and the Aryavarta itself.
They continued the yagya for about three hours.
Finally, the fires started to roar loudly, as if warning everyone of the arrivial of the 3 that were about to come out and the destruction they would cause together. Drupad went upto the blazing fire and with rebellion in his eyes made his demands.
"First, I would like a son who has a strength stronger than the Pandavas and Kauravas combined. I would like a son who is a valient warrior that would destroy Guru Drona for bringing me humilation". Agni- Dev hears this and grants him his wish. He announces "You will recieve a son with the qualities you wish for, and his name will be Dhrishtadyumna (meaning brave and splendid). A man forms from the fire taking a handsome form, yet a strong and valourous form with fire in his eyes, proving that he was Dhrishtadyumma.
A man forms from the fire taking a handsome form, yet a strong and valourous form with fire in his eyes, proving that he was Dhrishtadyumma
The man bows infront of his mother and father, touching their feet for blessings to which Drupada and Prishati bless him wholeheartdly.
"Next I would like a daughter who is as pure as the ocean yet wherever she goes as her in-laws, she will bring destruction. She should be the reason that the Kuru's beg for their deaths no matter what and yet the world should rever her as their goddess." Agni-dev again grants this saying "You will recieve a daughter which fufills your demands. Her name is Draupadi as she is the daughter of Drupad." The fires roar and the beautiful girl takes form from the fires. She has a fire in her eyes like her brother and is very beautiful indicating that she is none other than Draupadi herself.
She has a fire in her eyes like her brother and is very beautiful indicating that she is none other than Draupadi herself
The women with a smile on her face bent down like her brother and sought her parents blessings. They bless her wishing for a good future for her.
Agni-dev then asks "Drupada, are you ready to welcome your youngest daughter?" to which Drupad smiles and says "Whatever you offer my lord is prasad for my country".
Agni dev then announces "The last daughter I give you is very special. She will be the most beautiful of Aryavarta and will be the Princess of all kingdoms. She is a ansh of Parvati devi and will be a special being. She is destined to change Aryavarta, so please do not oppose any decision that she makes. She will be the Lakshmi, Parvati and Saraswati of your kingdom Maharaj. She will be named Anika as she is fearless and brave". The fires roar very loud this time signifying the birth of a goddess. It creates the form of a beautiful girl. Out comes, the most beautiful lady that has walked this earth, Rajkumari Anika. She has a calm demeanor yet fire in her eyes proving that she is infact a Agnisuta.
She has a calm demeanor yet fire in her eyes proving that she is infact a Agnisuta
She bends down to touch her parents feet and recieve blessings. They bless her wholeheartdly, happy that a goddess has entered their house as a daughter.
Draupadi, Dhristyumma and Anika stand together and go to get ready. They must present themselves royally as the prince and princesses of Panchal.
As the princesses enter, everyone are awestruck by the heavenly beauties
As the princesses enter, everyone are awestruck by the heavenly beauties. They think thoughts apperciating the beauty and remind themselves that these girls are the princesses of Panchal. Drupad sits on his throne and announces "Everyone, these are your prince and princesses.
Dhristyumma: Your eldest prince and the ruby of Panchal
Draupadi: Your eldest princess and the emerald of Panchal
Anika: Your youngest princess and the diamond of Panchal
And also Anika is the darling of Dwarka, Mathura and Hastinapur. Raise your glasses for your future royalty".
Everyone in Panchal celebrates the birth of the prince and princesses, not knowing the near future.
NOTE: first chapter done!!!
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moonqls on Chapter 3 Thu 19 Jun 2025 07:38PM UTC
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