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Submitted for The Houses Competition Forum - Round 5
House: Ravenclaw
Subject: Potions
Category: Drabble
Prompts: metaphor, simile, hyperbole
Word Count: 999
Metaphor: Hogwarts is an allegory of youth
Simile: Sirius scribbled on a parchment like a mad poet with a chaos-dipped quill.
Hyperbole: Cats and dogs raining from the sky, haiku that trips Filch, etc
It started, as most disasters did, with sixteen-year-old Sirius whispering, “Wouldn’t it be absolutely wicked if the castle turned into one giant figure of speech?”
James, who had been balancing his wand on his nose mid-breakfast, turned to look at him. The wand fell into his porridge with a plonk! “Go on.”
“Like... Hogwarts itself becomes every literary device ever spoken. The walls start waxing poetic. The suits of armor moan about broken dreams. Everything’s a metaphor. Or a simile. For only one day.”
Remus didn’t even look up. “You want to curse the entire castle?”
“Not curse. Improve .” Sirius’ grin spelled disaster. “A little poetic enhancement.”
“Can’t we ever just play Exploding Snap like normal students?” Remus muttered.
“Because we’re not normal , Moony.” Sirius scribbled on a parchment like a mad poet with a chaos-dipped quill. “Besides, you should be over the moon with this literary stuff.”
Remus tried to hide his smile as Sirius smirked and handed him the parchment. “Go on, Moon-Moon. You know you want to…”
And so, fueled by pumpkin juice, a stolen Literary Theory book, and no adult supervision, they combined Transfiguration, Charms, and whatever hex Sirius claimed to have invented while ‘sleep-dreaming,’ to put Project Metaphorgwarts into action.
The first casualty was Professor McGonagall, who walked into her classroom to find her desk had become a ‘mountain of paperwork.’ Quills jutted like pine trees from parchment hills, and ink flowed in rivers down the sides. She tried climbing it. She was not amused.
In the Great Hall, chaos unfurled like a simile set loose.
“Merlin’s pants,” James whispered as the ceiling cracked open and clouds rained cats and dogs. Real ones. Furry, soggy, yowling.
Students screamed. The cats hissed. The dogs chased Filch. One Pomeranian stole a Hufflepuff’s biscuit.
“Why are the suits of armor mooing?” Lily cried, drenched and furious.
“They’re as stubborn as cows,” James said apologetically. “That’s what I said this morning. I guess it stuck.”
She snapped, “Honestly, if you put half as much effort into your essays as you do your idiocy —”
Nearby, a Ravenclaw screamed as her boyfriend—previously described as “tall and handsome as a Greek god”—literally turned into a toga-clad marble statue mid-chew of his treacle tart.
Severus Snape disappeared mid-glare, replaced by a livid boa constrictor that immediately slithered toward the dungeons, hissing furiously.
And then the alliteration hit.
In the Charms corridor, Peeves found a cursed scroll and was gleefully reading, “Big blue bouncing bananas bombard Barnabas!”
BOOM.
Blue bananas the size of Bludgers exploded from the ceiling, pelting anyone in range. Barnabas the Barmy danced through them like a man who had finally met his match.
“And now... for onomatopoeia!” Sirius cackled, diving behind a suit of mooing armor.
CRACK! BOOM! WHAM!
Every sound made in the corridor manifested. When a second-year tripped and shouted, “Oof!” a giant invisible fist bonked him flat onto his back.
“What is that mysterious ticking noise ?” screamed a Ravenclaw. A ticking time-bomb appeared mid-air. It turned out to be a Toffee Timer, but the Muggleborn’s panic was real.
By mid-morning, staircases refused to move unless students answered a riddle about metaphorical significance. One fourth-year sobbed, “What does it mean when a stair says my love life is ‘a hallway of locked doors’?”
“I don’t even know what that means .” James doubled over with laughter.
Remus shouted, “We need a reversal spell before someone turns into ‘an emotional rollercoaster’ again! That Hufflepuff hasn’t stopped screaming since Potions!”
“She called her day a never-ending nightmare!” Peter cried. “And now there’s a literal Banshee in the stairwell!”
Remus, guilt flickering beneath the chaos, cried, “This was supposed to be clever, not catastrophic. It wasn’t meant to affect the castle’s emotional equilibrium, Padfoot! The library is singing Emily Dickinson !”
“Oh, no,” Peter muttered. “Not Dickinson .”
Meanwhile, bathroom mirrors began psychoanalyzing students. One Hufflepuff sobbed, “It told me my reflection is a shallow pool of people-pleasing tendencies masked as personality!”
James, who had once called Snape ‘a real snake,’ was now locked in mortal combat with a furious green boa constrictor with greasy black hair. It reared back, hissed venomously, and spat, “Is this literal enough for you, Potter?”
McGonagall cornered the boys just then.
“Fix it. Now ,” she growled, her scowl so sharp it could shear sheep.
“But, Professor,” Sirius said solemnly, ignoring the chaos around him, “don’t you see? We are all metaphors. The students, symbols . The teachers, similes with tenure.”
“Hogwarts is the… a-a-allegory of youth,” James added, still wheezing for breath after his combat with Snake Snape, “full of winding s-staircases we climb to… find ourselves.”
Peter piped in, “Also the bathroom made me realise I crave external validation.”
There was a long pause. Then a literal storm rolled through the corridor: rain, wind, and thunder, all circling one single figure walking serenely down the hall.
Albus Dumbledore.
Lightning crackled above him. Rain parted like curtains. His robes barely fluttered. As he passed, he winked at the boys.
Remus, eyes wide, whispered, “And he’s the calm in the eye of the storm.”
McGonagall looked skyward in silent suffering. “Five points for literary creativity. But if the floor calls me a relic of rigid restraint one more time—”
Filch tried to storm in, only to slip on a giant haiku:
Footsteps echo lies—
cleaning does not cleanse the soul.
Watch your back, caretaker.
“Ooh, poetic threats, that’s new,” Sirius said, scribbling it down. “We could publish these.”
James beamed. “We’ve made history.”
“We’ve made detention,” Remus muttered, dragging them toward the library while McGonagall helped Filch up.
By evening, the metaphors untangled, the similes simmered down, and the alliteration silenced.
In a corner, a newly re-humanized Snape wrung out his soaked robes and hissed, “I will be reporting all of you for defamation of character.”
Hogwarts was... mostly fine.
Except Filch now had three pet dogs, one cat, and a floor still banana-slick.
From a dark corner, Peeves whispered, “Bang. Crash. Fizzle.”
And the fireworks began again.